
Everfair by Nisi Shawl
Genre: fantasy
I read it as a(n): audiobook
Narrator: Allyson Johnson
Length: 12:44:00
Her Grace’s rating: 2 out of 5 stars
Everfair by Nisi Shawl is a steampunk alternative history novel that presents a fascinating premise: the people of the Congo discovering steam power before they were invaded by Belgium. Afro-Victorian Steampunk? Hell, yes! Alas, while the concept is intriguing and offers great potential, the execution of the story leaves much to be desired. There is a plethora of characters and an overly ambitious narrative, so the book struggles to maintain a cohesive and engaging plot in my opinion.
One of the main issues with Everfair is the overwhelming number of characters. While a large cast can add depth and variety to a story, Shawl’s approach feels excessive and convoluted. With so many characters competing for attention, I never really could invest emotionally in any one individual. The lack of a clear focal point or well-developed protagonists hampers the overall cohesion of the plot and makes me care a lot less about their individual story arcs.
Another drawback is the sheer number of ideas and themes that Shawl attempts to explore within the confines of a single book. From political intrigue to social revolution, colonization to racial tensions, and the development of steam-powered technology, the novel feels…crowded. Really, really crowded. Like a college dorm room crowded. The result is a fragmented narrative that lacks the necessary depth and exploration to do justice to any of the ideas presented. The overarching story gets muddy and confusing and fails to provide a satisfying resolution for any of the themes introduced.
While the premise of an alternate Congo with steam power is undeniably captivating, the execution of the story falls flat. The pacing is uneven, with long stretches of slow development punctuated by sudden jumps in time and perspective. This disrupts the flow of the narrative and makes it difficult to fully immerse oneself in the world Shawl has created.
It’s obvious that Shawl did a shitton of research and has a genuine passion for the subject matter, particularly in her exploration of the impact of colonization on the Congolese people. However, the execution of the story fails to translate that passion into a compelling narrative. The book’s potential is undermined by its disjointed structure and a lack of focus.
At the end of the day, Everfair by Nisi Shawl presents a fascinating premise that I really wanted to love so much, but it was just too much. It was a disappointing and tedious read.
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